Book Review: DEAD WITNESS by Joylene Nowell Butler





Book Info

• Paperback: 292 pages
• Publisher: Lulu.com (July 26, 2008)
• ISBN-10: 1435732499
• ISBN-13: 978-1435732490


Synopsis

Small town Canadian wife and mother, Valerie McCormick, witnesses the murder of two FBI agents in Seattle, identifies the killer as the head of a drug cartel, and ends up redefining herself to discover an inner strength she never knew she possessed. For when the FBI fails her, it's up to Valerie to reclaim her shattered life.





The Ratings

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J. Kaye’s Thoughts

When an author contacts me to review a self-published book, I cringe. The reason is I’ve had many come my way and I’d say about ninety-eight percent were beyond bad. I’m not talking about typos here. Stuff like that doesn’t bother me.

Most self-published books I’ve experienced lack in the important areas like the plot or the characters. The last one, I hated the main character, who was a professor at a university. I’ve known a few professors, and this author’s character didn’t fit the role. So when I speak positively of a self-published book, like I am about to do with this one, please don’t take it lightly.

The beginning of the book jumps into action when Canadian Valerie McCormick witnesses the murder of two FBI agents while on vacation in Seattle.

The FBI has been trying to track down this evasive Miquel DeOlmos. Witnesses end up dead when they try to testify against this Latin drug lord. Valerie agrees to help, but she has no idea what's in store and ends up in a witness protection program only to find out it’s not enough. When her children's safety is at risk, she takes matters into her own hands by hunting down DeOlmos herself.

My only complaint was I didn’t completely believe all of the FBI procedures. Keep in mind, I’m not expert and all of it might be true. As a reader, I wasn’t convinced.

Although the story was about the FBI and witness protection, it had a CSI Miami feel to it. I loved the story. The characters were crystal clear with depth. Once I got started, I had trouble putting the book down.

Joylene Nowell Butler is an author to put on your watch list. Her books are packed with non-stop suspense and I look forward to reading more.


To Learn More

Stay tune for an interview with this author, to be posted next week. Until then, you can read chapter one of this book by clicking here.


The Raffle

My copy will be passed on to a viewer who comments below. If you are new to the raffles, more guidelines can be found in the right sidebar or you can just click here. This raffle will be held October 11th.

Enter your name twice by blogging about this. If you blog about this contest, be sure to do two things:

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Enter your name a third time by coming back tomorrow and commenting on the Q & A with the author, Joylene Nowell Butler.







21 comments:

Ladytink_534 said...

Sounds like a good story J. Kaye. I agree with you on the self-published front- I've discovered quite a few stinkers that way. Glad you enjoyed this one though!

Joy said...

Hi J. Kaye! I'm interested in winning this book. I have posted about it on my sidebar. Thanks for the opportunity!

J. Kaye Oldner said...

Ladytink_534 ~ Bulter's book wasn't like that. I loved her book, a total page turner for me.

I think the writing was a bit choppy at the beginning. I didn't feel I should have pointed that part out in the review since I find this in books published by both large and small presses.

Joy ~ I love have you've posted giveaways in the sidebar! How cool!!

Shana @ Literarily said...

No need to enter me, but what a nice surprise. I'm so happy to read your positive review of this self-published book and can't wait to read an interview with the author.

Now I'm gonna have to check out Joy's sidebar :)

April said...

Great review, J.Kaye!! No need to enter me, of course, but was dying to read your review. I love to be able to compare notes on a book that I have also read, lol. I will also be anxious to read your interview. Joylene is the greatest and I hope I don't have to wait too long to read more by her!!

Breeni Books said...

It's refreshing to read this about a POD book. There are definitely some gems out there, you just have to weed through the duds.

naida said...

this does sound like an interesting read. great review as always.

I know what you mean about some self-published books.
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Anita Yancey said...

I it sounds like a good book. One I would enjoy reading. Please enter me. Thanks!
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Carol said...

This book sounds good! I love suspense and stories about the FBI. I like giving new authors a chance. You can find some good books that way.

Jackie B. said...

I need a good murder/suspense to read. I would love to win this.

Dar said...

I've read a few good reviews on this one. Glad you enjoyed it.

kamewh said...

Definitely sounds interesting!

Carol said...

Forgot my email address.
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Carol M.

This book sounds good! I love suspense and stories about the FBI. I like giving new authors a chance. You can find some good books that way.

J. Kaye Oldner said...

Carol M ~ Thanks for adding the extra information.

Michele said...

Yeah! I'm so glad this was a good one. I hoped from the spotlight description that you would enjoy it. I've now added it to my tbr list! Thanks!

J. Kaye Oldner said...

Sort of an FYI, Joylene emailed me and said that she has signed on with a publisher...isn't that cool!?! She is no longer self-published and we should see more books from her in the future. I can't wait!!

Janel said...

Sounds like a good book. Glad to see Joylene has found a publisher so that there will be more to come!

Becca said...

Sounds great. I would love a chance to win. Thanks!

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